Friday, April 30, 2010

The New Classics: I, Robot


Ah, did you think that my recent lack of sanity was going to make me forget about the New Classics this month? Rest assured, I haven't gone THAT out of mind just yet.

Any film that includes Sir Will Smith is at the top of my list (sir? yes, he's a "sir" to me). But I, Robot is extra-extra special because it also hosts a cast of some of my very favorite actors, namely, James Cromwell, Chi McBride, Alan Tudyk (as the voice of Sonny the robot), and a bit appearance by Shia LeBeouf.

This movie truly is a sci-fi lover's dream (and yes, I know that it's based on the book by Isaac Asimov, but this the (first and) last time you'll see it mentioned). It takes one of the very basic sci-fi elements--the robot--and combines it with, not only the (also) very basic idea that "robots can and will turn on the humans that created them", but also brings us into a world that we could easily see ourselves living in one day, which makes it all the more plausible.

But my most favorite aspect of this movie (no surprise here) is the portrayal of character. Any sci-fi story, whether it be in the written form or in film, absolutely does NOT interest me unless the characters are real and conflicted, both internally and externally, and it's not just about the brilliant futuristic tech. No matter how far we go into the future (or, conversely, into the past) humans are humans are humans are humans. They will always be your audience, thus the human characters must be believable, relatable, and worthy of our emotions. Otherwise, we won't give an ounce of ogre snot what happens. Period.

I, Robot opens with character. It starts with a heart-wrenching flashback in the form of a dream (which is much more effective in film than in novels, but that's another discussion for another day), which gives us an instant connection to the main character. It makes him human, and in this movie, that needs to be abundantly clear, since the conflict that comes later is very much about humans vs. machines.

Noteworthy, too, is that there is zero dialogue in the introduction. Spooner mutters a few things to himself, but for the most part, there is no talking. Now, whereas I strongly feel that flashbacks can be used in film and I supremely hate them in novels, I agree that opening with character, both in the film world and in the writing world, is usually most effective without loads and loads of dialogue because the audience/reader is smart, and can pick up on little hints you give them, and will decipher things much more clearly if they are shown and not told.

Those first few minutes of the movie are chock full of character, and hints about future happenings in the story. This is what entices us to keep watching. We feel for this character, and at the same time all these questions are popping up, begging to be answered.

We also see in those character-driven moments, a creative way of introducing the futuristic world that the story is set in, by showing different parts of Spooner's home that, while being familiar enough to recognize what they represent, are still foreign to us in the modern-day world. Which brings me to the second-most-important thing I look for in a sci-fi beginning: you'd better make it clear to me that this is a sci-fi as soon as you possibly can or you can bet your last banana you'll piss me off enough to stop reading/viewing.

(Yes, I did have a banana for breakfast this morning. Why do you ask?)

Does that seem overly harsh? Maybe. Personally, I'm uber-picky about openings, so take this as my opinion with a pound of salt. But, to be fair, I am not the only one who feels this way. In his book How to Write Science Fiction and Fantasy, Orson Scott Card relays his experience with his short story, "Tinker", being rejected by Ben Bova at Analog:

"Analog publishes only science fiction," said Ben, so of course a fantasy like "Tinker" simply wouldn't do.

I was outraged--at first. "Tinker" had psionic powers, a colony planet, a far future time period--if that wasn't science fiction, what was?

Until I looked again at the story the way Ben Bova must have seen it. He knew nothing about the other stories in the cycle. "Tinker" included no mention of its taking place on a world colonized by human beings, and there was nothing alien about the landscape. It could have been an English village in 950 A.D.

A rustic setting always suggests fantasy; to suggest science fiction, you need sheet metal and plastic. You need rivets."

Now, of course there are exceptions to the "sheet metal, plastic, and rivets" theory, but the concept is basically the same. You need to show something that makes it CLEAR this is a sci-fi story and not, say, urban fantasy. In I, Robot, we see contraptions in Spooner's home that suggest a future setting, and then, once he steps outside, there is definitely no more question about it, as we are bombarded with robots and advertising about robots.

And notice also, that those things are not only there to create setting and mood. The story is about robots. This is all part of the setup to the coming conflict, presented in such a way that keeps the audience interested and wanting more.

Are you starting to get an inkling now of why I love this movie so much? Haha. And I haven't even gotten into the story yet, which does not disappoint.

But, since I've written a novel-length post already, I'll end it here, and simply say: YOU MUST SEE THIS MOVIE. And if you've seen it already, WATCH IT AGAIN. Take out your spiral notebook and trusty pen and study the structure, the elements, the dialogue ... everything. This is a great movie to help you learn about effective storytelling.

For all the above reasons and much (much!) more, I, Robot is, hands down, a New Classic.

~Lydia

Thursday, April 29, 2010

52 Qualities of the Prosperous Writer: Number Seventeen, Happiness

This post is part of a weekly series in association with Christina Katz's ezine, The Prosperous Writer.
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"Successful people are typically already happy before they become successful. And their success is often an extension of the deeply happy feelings they possess."
~Christina Katz

"I wish people would achieve what they think would bring them happiness, in order for them to realize that that's not really what happiness is."
~Alanis Morisette

"True job satisfaction and happiness is about fulfilling your full potential, tapping into your own creativity, and feeling that you can make a difference."
~Chris Humphries

"Many persons have a wrong idea of what constitutes true happiness. It is not attained through self-gratification, but through fidelity to a worthy purpose."
~Helen Keller

"He who depends on himself will attain the greatest happiness."
~Chinese proverb

Hmm... does that last one seem to contradict the others? No, not really. The way I see it, if you are too reliant on others, you cannot stand on your own. People come and go. If your main support is in others, you will fall when they disappear.

I'm not saying we should downplay how much others help us, or take them for granted, but it can't be denied that there is a great deal of satisfaction in knowing that your success is a result of a good majority of your very own sweat and tears.

So my final quote comes from a fellow writer and e-friend, which nicely ties together the idea of recognizing the value of your own strengths, while looking to others to aid you with your weaknesses, and the right combination of those will ultimately lead to satisfaction, success, and happiness.

"Always keep in your circle of acquaintance someone you can teach and someone who can teach you."
~Laurel Montgomery

:)

~Lydia

Wednesday, April 28, 2010

Author Spotlight: Ashley Atkins

I'm really truly excited about our author spotlight today, that may or may not have been the result of 1) a random link by my good e-friend Le R, which then led to Ashley 2) discovering our blog on a day that I happened to post a Pop Quiz with an author spotlight as the reward if she correctly identified a 3) Stephenie Meyer quote about writing.*

So that's how I was introduced to THE Ashley Atkins. She is, in a word, AWESOME, and I'm so glad I met her through the intrawebs. Without further ado, take it away, Ashley!
(Lydia's comments are sprinkled in bold.)
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Bio:

Ashley Atkins was born in Durham, North Carolina in 1970. She holds a BS in Special Education from Appalachian State University and an MA in English and Creative Writing from NC State University. The former middle school teacher, fast food drive-through attendant and late-night police dispatcher is the founder of Carrboro Free Press, a weekly community paper and has written about 500 articles and opinion pieces that have appeared in NC and SC newspapers. Still holding on to grand plans to be a famous and much-ballyhooed writer, she now sells corkscrews, glassware and other wine accessories to support her writing habit. When she finds the time, Ashley lives in Carrboro with a talented chef-slash-writer and their 5 collective children. Keep up with her – if you can! – at theashleyatkins.blogspot.com.

How long have you been writing, Ashley?

Having just turned 40, I’ve been writing since well before you were born, Lydia! But the funny thing is that I’ve only recently begun to call myself a Writer. I’m talking a mere matter of months. It’s hard to explain, but I was always waiting for someone to smack me down and say, “No, you’re not.”

Totally understand that. So what exactly is it that you write, Ms. May Or May Not Be a Writer?

I’ve always written poems, stories, letters and essays. I have a novel on a zip disk in a shoebox in my closet. I wrote it in 1996, and I keep telling myself I’m going to find someone with a zip drive to upload it for me. I did some workshopping in a novel writing class with it and my instructor told me it reminded him a bit of Raney by Clyde Edgerton, but that he liked my book even better.

I continued working on that manuscript, BACKBONE & COLLARDS, through at least one fiction workshop in grad school, but I had this crazy dream that turned into a short story (this sounds eerily similar to the coming about of a certain vampire tale, doesn't it? how ironic) and I didn’t look back. I wound up doing a short story collection, THE WORLD WITHOUT, for my thesis.

It’s interesting, but I didn’t think my professors fully “got” what I was trying to do. I think I have a problem wherein I am a bit heavy handed with my lighthandedness. If that makes any sense at all. It’s like my favorite bumper sticker: Excess in Moderation. Some people say, “Huh?” but I say, “Mais oui!”

Makes perfect sense to me.

My thesis director did tell me that I write with a “detached ironic wit.” I think that sums up my style pretty well. I have also heard that I write “completely without irony,” which I do not think it true, but I am painting with these teensy weensy brushstrokes while pirouetting and keeping the straightest face that people really don’t know what to think. It’s a problem, I know. But it makes me so happy! I’m all about giving a little push and leaving the reader off balance until the end.

Example: I recently won the Bransford Bracket Challenge. March Madness!!! ZOMG, right? And the prize was, like, the best ever: a partial critique by Nathan Bransford. He got back to me last week, and one of the things that he said was, “I think it may take verisimilitude a little too far.” Oh, and did I say that the title of my current WIP is, THE TRUTH IS HARD TO TELL? Of course “tell” has a double meaning, and they both apply to this novel, but the main meaning of the word “tell” in the title is “discern.” Verisimilitude, anyone?

Crap. I can’t help it, though. That stuff fascinates me. And a few years ago I decided that “I” am my target audience.

In my opinion, we should all be our #1 fans.

An aside: My novel is actually told in eight stories, matryoshka-style. Six of the stories I wrote in grad school and have revised significantly. I created another character/story to bring everything together, and in doing so created yet another character/story. The wonderful outcome (for me) of Nathan’s critique is that I have created yet another overarching thread to perhaps make this story more commercially viable, though I do understand that the novel-in-stories is highly marketable right now. I read The Rejectionist.

Ummm. This makes it sound like all I’ve written is an almost-finished novel draft and some short stories that became a novel-in-the-throes-of-revision. (yeah, it kind of does) But my writing has been read by thousands. (wow, for realz?) For reals. I’ve written about 500 articles, interviews and opinion pieces that have appeared in five different publications: The (Raleigh) News & Observer, Mebane Enterprise, (Charleston) Post & Courier, Daniel Island (SC) News and Carrboro (NC) Free Press. Oh, and the Congressional Record. I am one hell of an editor. Seriously. Mad skills have I.

Summing up: I write commercial/literary contemporary Southern fiction as well as creative nonfiction.

This is sort of a non-sequitur (that's okay, go ahead), but I live in this crazy little town full of literary giants. Daniel Wallace (Big Fish) did weekly illustrations for this little newspaper I published. Lee Smith (Mrs. Darcy and the Blue-Eyed Stranger) read my novel and gave me a fabulous blurb. (sweet!) I drank a beer with the aforementioned Clyde Edgerton! Nic Brown (Floodmarkers) met me for some rosÈ at my favorite bar and, when pressed by yours truly, told me all about being an acclaimed novel-in-stories writer. Sarah Dessen (Along for the Ride) had coffee with my teenage daughter and discussed her work with her. (Sarah and I went to high school together.) (No effing way! Sarah is, like, one of my favorite YA authors. You totally have to hook us up... because you kind of owe me now. Not that I'm blackmailing you or anything. hehe.) I’ve had margaritas and sangria with Wells Tower (Everything Ravaged, Everything Burned), and that was at two different parties. I could go on, but one should only drop so many names. My point is that I am surrounded by all this warm, fuzzy supportiveness. If I write something that can sell, I have a built-in network. All I have to do is prove my worth. So I don’t have any excuses; I just have to do the work.

Warm, fuzzy supportiveness really is crucial to survive in this business. Now that you have this awesome network in place, what are your future goals?

Well, really, I want to be the shit. That is all.

Haha. Who doesn't? Be more specific.

Writing is my best shot at fame/glory/immortality/a meaningful life. (that's a given, but do you really love it?) I love writing. LOVE it. For eight months I’ve been in inside sales for a wine accessories manufacturer/distributor. It’s wholesale, which means I sit on my rump in a cubicle and I’m on the phone and computer all day long. There’s not a whole lot of room for creativity, but I get around it by writing copy for the web and product packaging and sending my customers clever emails and being the corporate tweeter. Words are my buds. One of the most prized possessions in our house is the Oxford English Dictionary.

We have one of those modern day blended families with five kids, ages 7, 10, 12, 12, 15. The 10-year-old is the only boy. I absolutely believe that the children are all their own people and not something that I “do.” What I do is laundry, dishes, shopping, work and write. They know that the writing is what I love, and I think it’s important that they see me hold on to that. I think that is one of the best things that I can model: not giving up a dream even though there are so many other things that try to get in the way.

Well said. As a mother, I completely agree with you.

What I want right now is this: to have the strength and discipline to finish my book. I know what I need to do, dammit. My query is actually just fine. (I hate you now) Don’t hate. Like I said before, I did get a crazy good blurb from a pretty famous Southern writer, and I’ve got that part down. It’s just that for an agent only reading the first 5 or 30 pages… well, that part needs work.
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All kidding aside now (although, that was quite fun), I wish you the best of luck in your writing endeavors, Ashley. Thanks so much for sharing your story with us! You are a DELIGHT.

~Lydia

*Disclaimer (because I don't want to see any bullshit in the comments): Despite the overwhelming majority claiming otherwise, and even though I personally don't care for her subject material, Ms. Meyer is a real writer. In fact, she could rightly be called a successful author. More successful, in fact, than most of us will EVER be, or could ever HOPE to be, even if she quit writing for good at this very second and we all continued to write until our dying breath. Just chew on that for a moment, if you will.

Monday, April 26, 2010

Tuesday Tunes--Using Love Songs To Kick Butt

Hey. It's Joe. You knew I'd get in on this music thing eventually.

When I was working on the final battle scene for Lydia's Web, amidst all the heavy and driving music, I used a love song the most. Jarus (otherwise known as the character everyone fell in love with) takes on impossible odds to protect Olessa, the female MC. One will always fight harder with someone to fight for. Yes, I know the actual song is about raising a child, but the chorus is what pulled Jarus back from near-death in a brutal combat scene to make sure Olessa got away safely:



Not every fight scene needs to be backed by heavy metal. I think it's because of how protective I am of my own Lydia, but love songs are what I generally use when writing a climax. Think they'll work for you?

Out of the Office

I did have a post somewhat prepared for today, but for personal reasons (as in, not writing related at all) I will be out of the office. Today's post will be moved to Friday, and we should be back tomorrow for Tuesday Tunes.

~Lydia

Sunday, April 25, 2010

Freakin' Out!


The purpose of this image is twofold.

One, I am going slightly crazy lately with all the writing projects and whatnot that I'm trying to juggle (perhaps an update on my specifics is in order soon). Add to that, Joe is writing again after a too-long slump (yay!) and is expecting his best beta reader/editor (that would be me) to read what he's got so far and give him honest feedback. Right. Now. AND I'm judging stories for a Writer's Digest Critique Forum "for fun" contest, and have to finish that tonight. Pressure... I can handle it... not... going to... crack...

Two, as our good friend Brad has highlighted multiple times, a monkey-type-animal pic is always funny and/or cute. I dare you to disagree.

Back to our regular programming tomorrow. Stay tuned.

~Lydia

Saturday, April 24, 2010

Pop Quiz

When asked, "What do you think makes your writing attract the attention that it gets?", who said this in reply:

"All I can guess is that when I write, I forget that it's not real. I'm living the story, and I think people can read that sincerity about the characters. They are real to me while I'm writing them, and I think that makes them real to the readers as well."

The first person to answer correctly in the comments will be my "Author Spotlight" for next week.

~Lydia

Friday, April 23, 2010

A Synopsis Is a Synopsis Is a Synopsis

Sometimes I think we make things harder on ourselves by knowing too much. Or, not necessarily by knowing too much, but by thinking we don't know enough, and therefore, we are on this endless search for knowledge about something that we don't even need.

What is a synopsis?

Easy answer. A synopsis is a summary of your story, complete from beginning to end. So why in the name of flitting fairies do we fret so much over this simple task? You wrote a novel, which, by nature, includes layers and depth and twists and interwoven plots and (doggone it!) a lot of hard work. That likely took you many months. Then you spent another good chunk of time revising it. How is it that you don't know that story inside and out?

You should be screaming now, "I do, Lydia! I know that story better than anyone!"

Of course you do. So tell me, what's it about?

Erm...

Why is that such a difficult question? It really isn't, when you think about it.

The next time you have to write a synopsis, whether it be of a novel or something shorter, DON'T LOOK AT YOUR MANUSCRIPT. Not even a little peek. You know the story, the characters, and all the important details.

Ah, there it is. The important stuff.

If you're writing something from memory, you are likely going to forget things, but are those things necessary for what you're presenting? Well, look at it this way. If you, as the author who has slaved over this project for a year or more, don't remember something, then the answer is a resounding NO.

I am currently writing a synopsis for a novella that I spent a good portion of last year working on. I had no idea how to start it, let alone fill in the allotted three pages, and I've written synopses before. Then, looking back on my approach to this task in the past, I realized that I was much too formulated. I broke down the story into equal parts, picked out the details from the manuscript that I thought were important, chapter by chapter, and then simplified the whole thing into a summary.

It worked, but (yikes!) that was way too much work. And really, why should I have to refer to a manuscript that I wrote and revised and rewrote and edited? I shouldn't. So I didn't this time.

The result? My novella is divided into three parts, and (lo and behold!) when I started writing the summary from memory, it easily fell into three pages, one part per page.

Fut the whuck? Yeah, I know. Crazy, right?

No, not really. I naturally (without even trying) remembered the important things, namely, the main plot, the main character motivation, and the main resolution. And since I had resolved that I'd be overwriting this thing, I didn't worry too much about how I was wording it, and just let it flow. Doesn't matter, I told myself, I'll be editing this down to size later.

Well, it's looking like there won't be much editing to do after all.* This was BY FAR THE BEST SYNOPSIS I'VE EVER WRITTEN. Hands down. Why?

1. I took the pressure off myself. It's so easy to go, "Zoh my God, Zoh my God, a synopsis, a synopsis, what do I do, what do I do!" and then Google search and read blogs on the topic until your eyes wither away.

Trust me, you are no better off after doing that than you were before. The only way to get good at this (like most writing-related things) is to practice, practice practice!

2. I did not once refer back to the manuscript. Doing that will only slow you down, and make you question whether you're adding the parts of the story that you need to. You already know your story better than anyone else does or ever will. Trust your memory to do the work for you.

Yes, it's that simple.

Don't make this out to be more than it is. In the end, a good synopsis can help you, but a bad one probably isn't as bad as you think.

~Lydia

*Notice I did not say there will be NO editing whatsoever. That would be silly. Every first draft needs a good polishing.

Thursday, April 22, 2010

52 Qualities of the Prosperous Writer: Number Sixteen, Groundedness

This post is part of a weekly series in association with Christina Katz's ezine, The Prosperous Writer.
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Like a tree, keep your roots firmly established in the ground while your branches reach for the sky.

Who are your roots? Are they channeling precious water to your core, or are they sucking you dry? Are they deep underground where they belong, or are they protruding the surface, tripping others along the path?

What are your branches? Do they contain nests for the birds to reside? Are they strong enough to support the weight when something larger comes along, a squirrel perhaps, or a rambunctious child?

Are your leaves soaking up the sun? Are they curling back, withering away, when the first storm cloud appears? They should welcome the rain; it helps them grow.

Are you a tree? A sapling? Or a seed just beginning to sprout?

Happy writing. Happy Earth Day.

~Lydia

Wednesday, April 21, 2010

What Do You Think You're Doing?

Do you think that just because someone desires to live in a house that they know how to build one? And if they choose to build this house, could they do it without a blueprint? Or tools? Or a team of specialists, such as carpenters, masons, plumbers, and electricians? Could they do it without any training or practice? High school wood shop doesn't count.

What exactly do you think you're doing, trying to write that novel? So you've got a story in your head... you think that's enough? Do you think that just because you know how to read and write and type that you can effectively piece together an entertaining story with characters we'll feel for? And even if you do somehow manage that, do you think it has the special something that it needs to get strangers across the globe to spend their hard-earned money on it?

Why is it that you feel this is something you can do without any prior experience, or something that you can simply pick away at in your "free time"? Because you read blogs from professionals? Because you blog about it yourself? Because you have "friends" on facebook saying they will buy whatever you publish? Because you have a dream? Because you feel you must write or die (whatever the f*ck that means)? Last time I checked, people could survive without writing fiction, so long as they have food to eat and water to drink.

How do you know if you have what it takes to rise above the masses before you've even finished one story, let alone submitted enough material to have collected stacks of rejection letters? Why do you think you can give advice on how to do things you haven't done yourself? What makes you think I'll take you seriously when I can see right through your bullshit?

Why do you think that getting an agent is your ticket to stardom? Why do you think that selling one or two novels will be the end of your financial struggles? Why do you think any professional in this business who has already put in years of hard work and effort should give you a second glance, just because you desire it?

WAKE. UP.

Write until you've ground your fingers down to nubs, until you hear your alarm going off in the other room and realize you hadn't slept a wink and now it's time to go to your "real job"... read until your eyes bleed, until someone has to call your name six times before they get a response because you can't bear to look away from the page... sit at the grown-ups' table, take their beatings, and say "thank you, may I have another" and MEAN IT because you crave their wisdom and experience... if you do all that -- let the honeymoon with your dream of a sparkly writing career end -- then you might just have what it takes, but there is still no guarantee.

If you think that I only blog about the positive, then you are sorely mistaken. This blog is a venue for my opinions, and I am a realist. You cannot appreciate the light until you've been lost in the dark. Some of you are blinding me with your fake beacons when the truth is you can't hold a candle to anyone. Get real and go back to the basics. Light a match. Burn some wood. Then we'll talk.

~Lydia

"You go to your closet and you select -- I don't know, that lumpy blue sweater, for instance -- because you're trying to tell the world that you take yourself too seriously to care about what you put on your back.

But what you don't know is that that sweater is not just blue. It's not turquoise. It's not lapis. It's actually cerulean.

And you're also blithely unaware of the fact that in 2002, Oscar de la Renta did a collection of cerulean gowns. And then I think it was Yves Saint Laurent -- wasn't it? -- who showed cerulean military jackets.

And then cerulean quickly showed up in the collections of eight different designers. And then it filtered down through the department stores, and then trickled on down into some tragic Casual Corner, where you no doubt fished it out of some clearance bin.

However, that blue represents millions of dollars and countless jobs, and it's sort of comical how you think that you've made a choice that exempts you from the fashion industry when, in fact, you're wearing a sweater that was selected for you by people in this room... from 'a pile of stuff.'"

~Miranda Priestly, The Devil Wears Prada

(a verbose yet classy way of saying, know what you're talking about before you open your mouth)

Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Tuesday Tunes - Music To Write By

The best fiction is founded on characters the reader can connect with, no matter what the genre. Every Tuesday, we'll post a song that touches on some part of the human experience.

Today's song is also a good example of how a clever title can enhance your story. Think about it... No Leaf Clover. For me, that conjures up a story of someone who thinks things are going their way and it ends up being disaster. A "no leaf" clover is as opposite as you can get from a "four leaf" clover, which symbolizes good fortune. And, not surprisingly, that's exactly what the song is about.

Your title is part of your selling pitch. It should give your potential readers an idea of what the story might be about... enough intrigue to read the jacket blurb or take a peek inside. And then once they do read the story, the title should have clear significance.



What does this song make you think of?
Any other thoughts on effective use of titles?

~Lydia

EDIT: If your browser is cutting off some of the lyrics, you can click on the Y in the bottom right corner to watch it full screen on YouTube.

Monday, April 19, 2010

The Nicest Rejection Letter I've Ever Received

We're back! Yay! Thank you all for understanding the need for us to focus on personal matters these past few days. (No, it had nothing to do with filing taxes. I wish it had been that simple.)

First, our official poll results.

Out of 53 total votes, an overwhelming 34% write science fiction and/or fantasy. That's amazing! It is also encouraging for me to see because that means we're focusing on the right things here.

Second place was YA, with 15%, and there was a third place tie between Romance/Women's Fiction and Mainstream. That also makes me smile. I write Women's Fiction, and I've recently added YA Romance to my writing agenda (crazy, right? perhaps I'll divulge more on that in a later post), so I will likely be talking more about that genre in the future.

Despite the wonderful results here, I still want to know if we're not covering anything that you would like to see. You can email me any questions or suggestions, or leave a comment, anytime.

Okay, now for the real post. I don't talk about my individual submissions too often anymore, mainly because I have so many other things to talk about that aren't as self-centered, and because I'd rather just announce when I've made a sale rather than stating every time I receive a rejection.

Well, today I feel I MUST tell you about a rejection letter I received this morning. I'm going to redact the name of the publication, but I will say that this is from a fledgling market (meaning it is new... they are currently putting together their first issue to be released this summer), and it is also a professional market (meaning they pay their authors the current professional rate according to SFWA standards). Also, less than a week after I submitted my story they had to temporarily close for submissions because they got flooded.

All of the above means that they are EXTREMELY BUSY right now, and because they pay well, I suspect the editors and everyone else involved are professionals in this business with prior experience to back up that assumption. I was expecting either a form rejection, a request for revision, or an acceptance. What I received was NONE of those. Please, read on...

Dear Ms. Sharp:

Thank you for submitting [redacted] to [redacted]. We are going to pass on your story. Because we've all received our fair share of form rejection letters, we wanted to offer more than just a "no", and give some feedback.

The story is quite well-written, and we liked the twist at the end. Your prose, while accessible, has an artistic feel that we found interesting, and, in my opinion, the way your prose changed as the protagonist shifted into uncertainty and anxiety was very effective.

Simply put, this isn't quite what we're looking to buy at this point. You are clearly a skilled writer, and we look forward to the opportunity to read more of your work in the future.

Thanks again for submitting. I hope that you keep writing, and that we hear from you again.

Good luck!

[redacted]
Publisher and Co-Editor


Uh... yeah, I'll take it. Thanks. :)

The point is, even good stories get rejected. We don't always know the exact reasons why, but it is usually NOT because they didn't like it, as you can see from this example. Unfortunately, most editors (and we'll throw agents in the mix, too, regarding query letters) don't have time to offer more than a simple form rejection letter. THEY'RE BUSY, BUSY PEOPLE.

This doesn't necessarily mean you're not good enough, and this doesn't mean you should give up. Ever.

Just saying.

~Lydia

Wednesday, April 14, 2010

What's Your Specialty?

Check all that apply before submitting your vote.



(If you select "other" please specify what it is in the comments. Thanks!)

Why do you write what you write?

Do you think it is better to specialize in a certain type of fiction? Or is it okay to write whatever you fancy? What might be the benefits and downfalls of each?

~Lydia

ADDENDUM:
I'm not going to be able to blog for the next couple days, so this poll will remain up until Monday. Thank you for participating!

Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Tuesday Tunes - Music To Write By

The best fiction is founded on characters the reader can connect with, no matter what the genre. Every Tuesday, we'll post a song that touches on some part of the human experience.

Today's song is one of rare brilliance. It not only creates a character situation in your mind, but also tells a clear and complete story from start to finish. To prove it, I'm going to give you the breakdown of it below the video.

Good stories don't just happen. They are structured to be a certain way in order to have the most impact to the reader/viewer/listener. This is work. It's a skill that is improved only with practice. Songwriters, in my opinion, are some of the most genius minds among us. They tell a story using poetry and a repetitive theme, often times with rhyme, then put it to music that enhances the intended emotion of each verse.

Listen to the song first while reading the lyrics (and I apologize for the extra junk at the beginning and end from the creator of the video, but it was the best quality one I could find). Then replay it and keep the arrow over the slide bar dot to see the minutes/seconds as they move along. Look for the times I mention in the breakdown below. It's amazing. (You may have to open another window to see them both simultaneously.)



(If you're not familiar with some of the terms I'm using here, then you've got some studying to do, my friend. Pick up Save the Cat! by Blake Snyder. It will improve every story you write, no matter what length, style, or genre. The beat sheet is on page 70, but it means nothing unless you've read the book. Put it at the top of your "to do" list. You can thank me later.)

Act One 0:00
Opening/Theme 0:00 - 0:30
Set-up 0:30 - 1:32
Catalyst 1:38
Debate 1:46 - 2:11

Act Two 2:12
B Story/Fun and Games 2:20 - 2:40
Midpoint 2:45
Bad Guys Close In 2:46 - 3:09
All Is Lost 3:10
Dark Night of the Soul 3:13 -3:39

(The "dark night of the soul" section here is done entirely through music... listening to that part, can't you just imagine what's going through the MC's head at that moment? And you don't have to be told with lyrics... you just know.)

Act Three 3:40
Finale 3:40 - 4:54
Climax 4:03 - 4:42
Closing/Denouement 4:42 - 4:54

As a side point, notice how important the second act is in the overall structure. That's your middle. Is it no wonder then why so many writers have problems with middles, and why a poorly executed middle will lose a reader? They are the meat of your stories.

Also noteworthy is how short the denouement is in comparison to the climax. I've mentioned that several times before because it seems that long denouements are the bane of amateur novelists. The climax is your resolution... there really shouldn't be much to wrap-up afterward.

What else did this song make you think of? What emotions came through the lyrics? The music?

~Lydia

Monday, April 12, 2010

Guest Blogger, Jon Paul: Taking Flight -- A Story Structure Checklist

Approaching the end of a career as a Navy helicopter pilot, Jon Paul is still deciding what he wants to be when he grows up; he's writing fiction in the meantime. His current WIP is a novel set in Baghdad in 2005, tentatively entitled, First Man. Check out Jon Paul's adventures at his blog, Where Sky Meets Ground.


As a Navy helicopter pilot, I am often surprised by lessons and techniques I've picked up during my eighteen-year flying career that apply well to the work of a fiction writer. Good fiction, like flying, relies on a skillful admixture of short and long term processes to achieve a seamless and magical effect: transporting the reader (or passenger) safely and enjoyably from one place to another.

Think about it: since a flight and a story both have a defined beginning, middle, and end, both typically involve movement toward a distant destination, and because both entail a complex sequence of events in an understandable order, the physical act of going flying can be viewed as a metaphor for good story structure (or novel scene structure for that matter).

Let’s peel back the layers of this comparison and dig deeper. As we do, it may be useful to construct a checklist to remember the key points. Checklists are another handy aviation tool available to the fiction writer. Pilots rely on step by step checklists for many aviation activities--pre-flighting aircraft, filing a flight plan, taking off, executing an instrument approach and landing--to verify that important items are complete. Having a story structure checklist in your hip pocket as you write can serve the same purpose: to ensure the proper fictional elements are in place as you tell your stories.

Today, we’ll discuss five steps that should be included in a basic story structure checklist.

1. File Your Flight Plan. In Flannery O’Connor’s short story A Good Man Is Hard To Find”, the very first line gives the reader clues about the story’s final destination, and how the story will end: “The Grandmother didn’t want to go to Florida .”

In the same way that air travelers purchase tickets to known destinations, one of the primary roles of your story’s beginning should be to signal to the reader where the story will lead. These clues may be obvious, similar to the way O’Connor begins this story, or they may be subtle, but a good writer understands a story’s beginning should get the tale airborne and on its way, in a manner and direction the reader can discern. If you as the writer aren’t sure where the story is going, chances are your reader won’t know either.

2. Give The Safety Brief. We’ve all heard the airline announcements: “In the event of a loss in cabin pressure, a mask will fall from the ceiling,” etc. When the stewardesses give this safety brief, they are essentially giving the passengers a set of rules by which to understand how to behave during the flight.

As writers, one of our jobs is to give readers a set of rules to read by. You should include details that say to the reader: “if this happens, then expect this.” In Jack London’s “To Build A Fire”, we clearly understand what is at stake for the man:

“When it is seventy-five below zero, a man must not fail in his first attempt to build a fire.”

London gives us a prism through which to view the man’s struggle at the end of the story. We, as readers, understand that the man’s life is in the balance, and this knowledge heightens tension, reader investment and the final impact of the story’s outcome.

3. Watch Your Airspeed. If an aircraft gets too slow, the wing stalls and you literally fall out of the sky. As a result, pilots have a saying: “Airspeed Is Life.” Likewise, it’s easy to argue that for good fiction, “Pace Is Life.” Get too wordy and your reader may lose interest. Move too quickly and there may not be enough detail to keep the story interesting.

Let’s look at the O’Connor story again. Read through the scene that begins: “They stopped at the Tower for barbecued sandwiches…”, down to the place where they “drove off.”

O’Connor covers a lot of ground in this scene, but did you notice what’s missing? Although the stated reason for their stop is to eat lunch, the actual meal is never shown to the reader. There are far more important items to discuss, so O’Connor omits the lunch details to maintain pace and keep the story moving forward.

4. Check The Weather. Before a flight, pilots also check weather at the final destination, because that weather can affect their flight plan. Similarly, how the writer tells a story infuses a certain light and energy into the reader’s experience; the flavor of the prose informs the events being told.

In “To Build A Fire”, London peppers his prose with descriptions of the weather that both paint the desolation the man faces, but also foreshadow the bleak ending:

“There was no sun nor hint of sun, though there was not a cloud in the sky. It was a clear day, and yet there seemed an intangible pall over the face of things, a subtle gloom that made the day dark, and that was due to the absence of sun. This fact did not worry the man.”

Note here that London paints the environment in harsh tones, but also foreshadows the attitude that eventually gets the man in trouble. Good writers understand that atmospherics in storytelling can be as critical as other writing choices.

5. Get Clearance To Land. I’ll share a last aviation joke with you: Pilots commonly say that as long as the number of takeoffs and the number of landings in your logbook are the same, everything is fine. The fiction corollary is this: in order for readers to properly understand a story’s ending, they must properly understand the road signs you’ve posted along the way.

In Shirley Jackson’s “The Lottery”, she provides a slew of details throughout the story that serve to set up the ending. The boys stuff their pockets with stones. Mr. Summers makes the lists and conducts the roll call. The heads of households draw slips of paper from the box.

Jackson seamlessly weaves these different elements together to create a coherent narrative--but a reader, upon finishing the story, instantly knows that their real purpose is to facilitate the believability of the ending (I’ll not reveal the end for those who have not read it—but it’s worth a look!). Even in a story like this, where the story’s ultimate destination is hidden from the reader until the last moment, the writer has included enough details in their structure to make for a smooth landing.

So that’s it, five steps to help you improve your fiction. Hopefully, this story structure checklist has given you another tool in your fiction writer’s toolbox to let your stories take flight and soar off the page.


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Thanks for joining us today, JP!

If anyone else is interested in providing a guest post, please contact me at lydiasharp4sff (at) yahoo (dot) com.
Happy writing!

~Lydia

(photo credit)

Sunday, April 11, 2010

'Tis the Season for Magnolia Blossoms

Magnolia trees are in full bloom now, and they're absolutely gorgeous. Click on the image to enlarge.



"Silver white winters that melt into springs... these are a few of my favorite things."

~Lydia

Saturday, April 10, 2010

A Few Words from the Pros

I follow a lot of blogs, and this past week quite a few wanted to remind me of just why I started following them in the first place. Here is a handful of quotes from some of my favorite industry professionals who blog.

"I got over five hundred rejections before landing a book deal."
~Joe Konrath, A Newbie's Guide to Publishing

"This is not an easy pursuit nor a casual endeavor. Nor a quick path to fame and riches. It is not (as one person's letter put it this week): "something to try just for the hell of it."
But this is a calling for some. A creative and inspiring journey. Finding those stories keeps the search going..."
~Jennifer Jackson, Et in arcaedia, ego

"Trust your voice, even if you occasionally hear all your favorite authors and your mother among them."
~Tom Bentley in his interview with Guide to Literary Agents

"I love the books I represent [and] it is really, really cool to know that the books I love are being read by thousands of others."
~Jessica Faust, BookEnds

"The bottom line is simple: There is no ‘one right way’ to do anything."
~Gini Koch in her guest post on The Other Side of the Story

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I have fallen into a tornado of due dates (mixed metaphor? I can't even tell anymore)."
~moonrat, Editorial Ass

"Any protagonist with strong opinions, deep convictions, tidal emotions and profound self-regard can transport us out of ourselves as effectively as a Nephilim-fighting nun."
~Donald Maass, Writer Unboxed

"Almost without exception, every writer benefits from a good editor."
~Eric, Pimp My Novel

"Writers are willing to acknowledge that nonfiction writers need platforms but want to endlessly debate whether or not fiction writers, memoir writers, children’s writers, etc. need one. I can clear this up: Every writer who plans to publish or be published needs a platform. It doesn’t matter what you write."
~Christina Katz, The Prosperous Writer

Have a great weekend!

~Lydia

Friday, April 9, 2010

For the Love of Fairies

Pinnochio had one. Peter Pan had one. Cinderella had one. Fairies are to fantasy what aliens are to sci-fi. How many of you fantasy writers have used a fairy or fairy-like creature in one or more of your stories? I seem to have a preference for the little darlings. And there are so many different ways you can portray them.

I like the small variety, sometimes referred to as a pixie. (For example, Moonalynn, in my short story "The Keeper of Secrets"). They usually have some kind of unexplained power that their human counterparts do not (without Tinker Bell's pixie dust, all the happy thoughts in the world wouldn't get your feet off the ground), and luminesce, either as an emotional response or when using their power. Or just because they want to. And their physical strength is far greater than would be expected from such a tiny source.


Pixies, oftentimes, have very dynamic character, vacillating between high and low emotion within short periods of time. They are usually temperamental. Short-fused. They don't think through their actions first, they just act. And I might add extreme loyalty to that character checklist as well, but only to the one or two people they feel deserve it.

I have fun employing those "typical" traits, and then combine them with some not-so typical ones when writing a new fairy character. I also enjoy the variety of wing shapes and colors to choose from. Fairies have so many options; they easily get your creative juices flowing. It's no wonder so many of us love to write about them.

Any other fairy lovers out there? Who are some of your favorites, either in someone else's work or your own, and why?

~Lydia

Thursday, April 8, 2010

52 Qualities of the Prosperous Writer: Number Fourteen, Experience

This post is part of a weekly series in association with Christina Katz's ezine, The Prosperous Writer.
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I love basketball (well, that's kind of a given considering I live in Cavs town), but I would never attempt to play at the pro level. I can't even consistently get the ball UP TO the net, let alone IN it. I know my limits. But, with a lot of practice and hard work, I could possibly play pro.

Maybe. Someday.

There is a difference between a spectator and a participant. In the publishing industry, readers are spectators and authors are participants. Just because someone is an avid reader doesn't necessarily mean they know how to write, let alone, write well enough to be a contender among the professional "players."

This is in no way meant to be discouraging. I merely want to put things in perspective for those of us dealing with the inevitable frustrations of being amateurs. We cannot expect huge results right away just because we want them, or feel we deserve them. Do not underestimate the role that EXPERIENCE plays on the road to success.

LeBron James. LeBron James. LeBron James.

I know people who live outside of Cavs town probably hate that name (you're all just jealous, though). He is still young, and already an NBA MVP. If you've ever watched him play, and I mean REALLY watched what that man does for the team, you will not once attribute his success to mere talent or luck.

Nope. He played basketball for YEARS before he even graduated high school. That's years of experience before going to the pro level. He takes every aspect of that game seriously, and he continues to practice, practice, practice and improve his skills.

I recently saw his foot bend away from his leg in a way that is as "opposite of natural" as it could get. His ankle should have snapped, or, at the very least, he should have been rendered useless for the rest of that game. But that's not what happened. He shook it off and kept playing. One of the announcers explained the reasoning for this phenomenon: part of LeBron's off-court training involves exercises that make his tendons so flexible that when something like that happens, they just stretch. No injury.

Well, let's say that an aspiring novelist starts querying agents for their novel and receives rejection after rejection after rejection. Maybe even six months straight of rejections. They get salty, and instead of looking to themselves to figure out how to improve-- more practice, more training, more experience-- they blame the industry for being corrupt. They blame the agents who "don't know a good thing when they see it".

They say the whole system is set-up to make new writers fail.

Wrong.

Look at any other industry. How many aspiring "participants" are there? How many are actually successful? How many gain that success after many years of trying and failing, and more importantly, NOT giving up?

Learn from your mistakes. Keep trying. Add to your experience. Somewhere down the road, you'll make your first public SLAM DUNK.

~Lydia

Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Author Spotlight: Christi Corbett


I'd like to introduce you all to a very talented author that I met through the blogosphere. Christi Corbett was one of the three lucky gals to be the first ever guest bloggers on Pimp My Novel last December (along with myself and Randy Susan Meyers . . . and let me just reiterate here that I still feel highly honored to have shared that week with those two wonderful ladies). Christi's article, A Writer's Space . . . Ideal vs. Reality is a fun-filled read and, needless to say, it got my attention.

After seeing her guest appearance, I checked out her blog, and I was hooked. She often talks about her adventures in writing while caring for twin five year-olds, the stress of editing and rewrites, and I especially look forward to her Friday quotes to get me through the weekend.

On April 2, Christi released her book trailer. I'm not generally a fan of book trailers, but this one is quite a few notches above the others I've seen. No surprise, though, since Christi has a background working in the Creative Services Department of a television station. This is a perfect example of how we can use our prior experiences to aid us in our writing careers. No one should feel that they have started too late, or have wasted their efforts in previous career endeavors, to be successful authors.

We write about life, so whatever we've done in life will help us connect with our audience.

Read Christi's interview at Romance Writers on the Journey, and see if you don't just instantly fall in love with her like I did. Her story is inspiring, to say the least. Please join me in wishing her the best of luck with her historical fiction novel, Along the Way Home, and all her future writing endeavors.

Good luck, Christi!

~Lydia

Tuesday, April 6, 2010

Tuesday Tunes - Music To Write By

The best fiction is founded on characters the reader can connect with, no matter what the genre. Every Tuesday, we'll post a song that touches on some part of the human experience.

This song reminded me of Sylvia, the main character of my current women's fiction WIP, One-Way Ticket to Nowhere. She has a very optimistic attitude toward life in general, which is completely opposite of her MC counterpart, Jackson, who is in a state of "I hate the world and everything in it" when they first meet.



What does this song make you think of?

~Lydia

Monday, April 5, 2010

Share Your Favorite Lines You've Written

"As apples of gold in silver carvings is a word spoken written at the right time for it."
~Proverbs 25:11

I grew up painfully shy. The spoken word never came easy for me, and sometimes, it still doesn't. I get tongue-tied often, even when speaking basic things to an audience of one (and don't even get me started on the nausea-inducing act of speaking in front of a group of people). This has become sort of an inside joke between me and those who know me personally, whether it be a family member, a friend, or a co-worker. "You have such a way with words," they say in jest. "You call yourself a writer?"

I can't argue with such logic. If my writing was anything like my speaking, I'd be sunk.

But even with writing, I rarely get things right on the first try. It's no secret that my first novel, started nearly two years ago, is still undergoing revision. I've completed many projects since then, and all of them are dear to me.

Rewriting can be an arduous task, but I can't deny that it produces sheer literary genius from time to time (haha. I'm a little biased. It's really just "better than average"). There are moments when I go back and read my own work, and it feels like I'm reading someone else's stuff. "I couldn't possibly have come up with that," I think. Have you ever felt that way?

Today, I'd like to share some of my favorite exchanges, a few of my "apples of gold", and I'd love for you to share some of yours as well. Don't be afraid to leave long comments today. I'm looking forward to a good read.

I'm going to put the lines I particularly love in bold. And of course, this is nowhere near a complete sampling. There isn't room or time to show everything I consider a favorite, but you'll likely notice that all of them involve male/female banter. That's become sort of a trademark of mine.

From my sci-fi novel, Dead Star Shine:

Nathym chuckled. "Don't worry, it won't likely be an issue. Even if someone did see your long hair, we are not in the habit of lusting after children."

"I beg your pardon, sir, I am not a child."

He eyed me up and down, then studied my face for an uncomfortable length of time. "You can't be any older than sixteen."

"Seventeen," I corrected, and upturned my nose, although I felt like sticking out my tongue.

"Three years shy," he said.

"In your culture, not mine."

"Within Fousan borders, we follow Fousan law."

"Then why did you bring me--" I clamped my mouth shut.

Nathym gestured toward the door. "If you'd prefer the company of the bears, Mirra . . ."

"Fine. I am still a child in your eyes. Can we move on?"

From my sci-fi novel, Web: Book One of the Cricket Trilogy:

"You may have taken my seat on the bridge, Commander, but this is still my ship. You work for me. So if I try to contact you, whether it's to save my life or scratch my back, I don't care if you're paralyzed from the neck down, you better find a way to hit that comm with the tip of your nose inside of three minutes or I'll kick your ass so hard you'll be chewing on the sole of my boot." Nostrils flaring, she stood her ground, like an ant challenging the foot about to smash it.

Jarus couldn't help but laugh at the ridiculousness of what came out of her pouting little mouth. "Dr. Pastra was right." Her face faltered at the mention of him. "You do have a temper." Jarus turned and headed for the door. Olessa was right on his heels.

Now I've got your attention, Miss Skye. Have a little crush on the doctor, do you?

"Jonathan said that?" Her tone was borderline whimpering.

"Yep." Jarus purposely lengthened his stride to hear her short legs try to keep up.

She followed him into the lift and smacked the down arrow. "What else did he say?"

"Hmm. I don't recall exactly." Jarus leaned on the back wall and squinted at the ceiling, pretending like he was trying to remember the conversation. In truth, he remembered every word of it. "Something about a . . . a complex personality."

Olessa's jaw dropped, answering his unspoken question of just how big her mouth really was, even if it had been in the figurative sense.

The lift slid open and Jarus smiled as he briskly walked toward the armory, back facing Olessa. He punched in the security code.

"You're wrong," she insisted. "You have to be."

He turned and met her glare. "Really? Why's that?"

She looked away and crossed her arms. "Nothing. Never mind. I've got a lot to do today, so can we just get started?"

"You're the boss."

"And don't you forget it."

Jarus mimicked her sharp stomps toward the first training station. Teasing her gave him a great deal of satisfaction. He justified it as an effective mechanism for putting up with her blistering attitude. For the next hour and a half she was in his territory, and he was going to enjoy every minute of it.

From my fantasy novella, A Messenger's Oath:

"I serve Queen Fyor of Erkek with my life and will someday honor her with my death."

Lovec laughed. "You are no use to her dead. I doubt the good queen would find that an honor."

Mensa twisted her mouth. What did he know of honor? His people wasted their lives in musical arenas and died for no cause. They had no purpose. No direction. They merely drifted on the breeze of the latest philosophical whim.

"My present journey is more important than any life-quest you decided to take, in search of your true self, or whatever silly thing you were doing."

She took pleasure in his scowl.

"An ogre that speaks elven"--he did well to change the subject--"and it just happens to attack a royal messenger of Fyor on an important journey to . . . where is it you are headed?"

"That is not your concern. None of this is your concern. Be on your way, Lovec of Soral, and let me be." She headed through the trees, searching for another suitable place to rest. However far she had to go to get away from him.

Footsteps shuffled the forest floor behind her. "I'm afraid I can't do that, messenger."

"Why?" His presence was more chafing than the leather between her thighs.

"It is my fault that the ogre is dead. If I had not interfered, you would have vital information regarding your enemy."

She turned. "Your point?"

"By order of the prophets, it is my duty to help you until you have reached your goal."

She no longer doubted his origin. Only a Sorali would come up with something so utterly ignorant. They locked glares like young dragons ready to spar.

"I never have, nor ever will, require the assistance of a man," she said through her teeth. "I relieve you of your duty."

"Only a holy man can do that."

"Your family will wonder about you."

"I have no family in Soral."

Mensa shouted in frustration and thrust her hands toward the stars. Blast the heavens for allowing him to cross her path!
Okay, that's enough of me. Now it's your turn. :)

~Lydia

Friday, April 2, 2010

Oh the Joy of Fridays

This is a tough day of the week for me, since it's the only weekday that I work outside the home. And since I spent my "blogging time" emailing a beta reader about a story (or two) he'd just looked over for me, I now have to resort to a random post, courtesy of three of my favorite things:

1. YouTube (c'mon, you had to have known that was coming... unless you're new here. In that case, you'll be forgiven)

2. Breaking Benjamin (another no-brainer for the regulars)

3. Will Smith (okay, you may not have known this one. He's one of my favorite actors of all time. Been a fan of his since his Fresh Prince days)

I discovered this video a while back. It combines all three of the above things. Someone made a video of the movie 7 Pounds (which stars Will Smith), and put it to one of the Dear Agony songs by Breaking Benjamin. Ironically, it is "Dear Agony", the song which the album is named after.

WARNING: IF YOU HAVE A PAINFUL SENSITIVITY TO HIGHLY EMOTIONAL SCENES INVOLVING DEATH, DO NOT WATCH THIS.

That being said, this is one of the best videos I've ever seen. I dare you not to cry, or vomit in your mouth, or have a near cardiac infarction.

Yeah. It's that good.



~Lydia

Thursday, April 1, 2010

52 Qualities of the Prosperous Writer: Number Thirteen, Creativity


This post is part of a weekly series in association with Christina Katz's ezine, The Prosperous Writer.
Special announcement: Christina has released her first ebook! Click HERE to see how you can get a discounted introductory price in the month of April.
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My son gets on movie kicks, where he'll want to watch the same movie over and over again for a period of time, then ditch it for a different movie and do the same thing with that one. Currently, he's been watching Underdog just about every day for the past week. It's actually a pretty good movie, even for adults.

There's a scene in the first half where Shoeshine (that's the Clark Kent or Peter Parker version of Underdog, in case you're not familiar) hears a street vendor shouting a sales pitch:

Hot dogs, hot dogs!
That's what I got!
Hot dogs, hot dogs!
Nice and hot!

Shoeshine: Why is he talking like that?

Jack: He's rhyming. You know, it's a gimmick. To get people's attention.

Shoeshine: That seems like a strange convention... for you to mention.

The dog figured it out, and from then on, he used rhyming in all of his superhero adventures. It became something that people associated with Underdog. And if you've ever tried to come up with rhymes "on the fly", you understand that it requires 1) imagination, 2) a thorough grasp on the mechanics of the English language, and 3) an understanding of your audience.

Without all three of those components, your gimmick is unproductive and your creativity is questioned. Time to go back to the drawing board.

We may think that our creativity is no longer needed once our story is complete. But if you want to be known for something, and increase publicity and sales, it's time to kick it up a notch and really get those creative juices flowing. Yes, it takes a lot of imagination to write a short story, a novel, or even a blog post, but you're not going to stand out among the amorphous blob of... everyone else that's in the same position as you are, no matter what that happens to be, unless you get creative with your gimmick.

I hate to use the word gimmick because it insinuates that we're tricking people into buying something they don't want to, or shouldn't. But I don't think of it that way. I like to call it... we're helping people realize their desire for something that they perhaps didn't know about until we showed them. Make sense?

Okay. I can't tell you how to publicize yourself or your work. It's highly individualized, especially if you want to be seen as something truly unique. So I'm simply going to show you a few examples of people that I feel have been innovative in their approach.

J.C. Hutchins, author of 7th Son: Descent, also known as, the podcasting entrepeneur. Read his story HERE.

Carleen Brice, author of Orange Mint and Honey, also known as, the door-opener for black authors. Read her story HERE.

Cory Doctorow, author of Little Brother, also known as, the internet publisher extraordinaire. Read his story HERE.

What do you want to be known for? For your writing, obviously. But in today's market, you need a bit more oomph to get noticed. The creativity doesn't stop when you type END. Keep it going. You might just be the underdog that the future generation of authors looks up to as a superhero.

~Lydia